As I walk through the days of ma life,
As I look into the future ahead,
The path looks blurred,
The future looks uncertain,
For what’s next is an enigma,
And what’s present is all I can trust.
With days so bleak,
With future so gloomy,
Ma heart goes downbeat,
And ma mind goes unconstructive.
For what’s next is an enigma,
And what’s present is all I can trust.
With heavy cross to carry,
With many a promises to keep,
Ma corpse seems tired,
And ma soul quits to respond,
For what’s next is an enigma,
And what’s present is all I can trust.
With opportunities turning upside down,
With every promise being dejected,
I’m left alone with many in the field,
To fight ma battle for existence.
For what’s next is an enigma,
And what’s present is all I can trust.
But I’m a warrior,
Who knows not to quit,
Will tussle through ma battle,
And emerge a victor.
For what’s next may be an enigma,
But in me and my abilities is all I trust!!!
9 comments:
Ma corpse seems tired,
And ma soul quits to respond,
This is a beautiful metaphor...
You have done a great job and infinite justice to the situtaion of "uncertainity"...
Nice post... :)
What you'll post next is an enigma
But it'll be good,i know and i trust...
hey varu.. nice poem yaar..
but you dont have to worry. future is supposed to be uncertain. thats wat makes life worth living. if you know the future before hand then wats the point..
And i'd like to add one more thing, "When God helps you, you believe in His abilities. And when He doesn’t, He believes in yours !"
trust yourself..and you'll surely win.
I gone through ur blog.................a nice one........it fills us with an urge to be what u r and hav faith in yourself no matter what da circumstances r............Thats da champ wihtin all of us which is need to be recognised and always be trusted.........
i knw u hv draftd all ur feelings which r running through ur nerves this time.............
its with every1, we all r fightg a battle rite 4m our birth n unfortuantely till our death
vry beautifully said........
hats off 2 U my friend!
keep writing
Thank you all for the wonderful comments:)
nice poem dude!!
I can sniff a hint of USA thing here...... if that is the case then just dont forget the last stanza!!!
Success is our destiny and its only ours to take, may be today or sometime later...... we will get it for sure!
later
shad
hey sanu, nice poem yaar...really..
n hats off to you!!!
"But I’m a warrior,
Who knows not to quit,
Will tussle through ma battle,
And emerge a victor."
Whatever be the past, present or the future, when you have the confidence and the spirit to fight, noone can stop you from success.And u have that spirit in you...God bless you dear!!!
Keep writing...
Hey varu !!!!! wat a true n genuine expression of ur inner self n inner feelings at that time.....the melancholy trying to overpower rays of hopes, the hopelessness towards the success, all all expressed very aptly
But the last thing that ur mind said
that I am a warrior is most praiseworthy....
So keep the spirit high n keep on writing ..good work
- Anup
hey varu...for me i think this is one of your best blog....bcaz this piece of writing is so motivating and shows ur fighting abilities specially whn ur down nd out...keep it up bro!!!...nd i knw in the end u will emerge victorious.
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